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Gun Simulator: Shake to Shoot
Gun Simulator - Shake to shoot29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Shake to Shoot”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Shake to shoot”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Use Phone & enjoy Gun Shooting”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “gun”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 363 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 218 characters.
1,075 characters.
Enough substance
452 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.41 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.74 average.
17 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
23,037 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 20 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
Generic notes: “Guns Index and Mismatch Fixed Ads Updated”
Release notes say something
80 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
165 MB.
Reasonable download size
31 MB.