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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Screens 5: VNC Remote Desktop
Remote Desktop ManagerScreens 5: VNC Remote Desktop
Fast & Secure Computer Access
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “VNC Remote Desktop”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Fast & Secure Computer Access”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 36 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 224 characters.
2,657 characters.
Enough substance
1,689 characters.
31 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.51 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.74 average.
555 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
99 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 16 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 16 days ago.
1860 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
2420 characters of release notes.
17 languages.
Localised listing
14 languages.
69 MB.
Reasonable download size
249 MB.