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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Star Battle Hoshi Puzzles
Star Puzzle GameStar Battle Hoshi Puzzles
Daily Two Not Touch challenge
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Daily Two Not Touch challenge”
Has a subtitle
“star puzzle game - logic game”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “star”, “puzzle”, “game”.
First paragraph is 354 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 35 characters.
1,435 characters.
Enough substance
408 characters.
9 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.75 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.25 average.
267 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 18 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 171 days ago.
227 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “+ Update to the latest API!”
20 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
75 MB.
Reasonable download size
123 MB.