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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
WeatherBug: Weather Forecast
My Lightning Tracker & AlertsWeatherBug: Weather Forecast
Live Local Radar, Storm Alerts
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Weather Forecast”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Live Local Radar, Storm Alerts”
Has a subtitle
“Live Lightning Map & Tracker”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “lightning”, “tracker”.
First paragraph is 108 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 263 characters.
3,588 characters.
Enough substance
1,042 characters.
26 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
2 iPad screenshots.
4.78 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.76 average.
2,185,506 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
66,265 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 1 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 17 days ago.
99 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements.”
6 languages.
Localised listing
12 languages.
237 MB.
Reasonable download size
60 MB.