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Bible
Haven - Bible Chat5/30 characters. A brand this well known can afford a short title.
Uses the 30 characters
18/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone, which is fine at this brand size.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Bible Chat”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Daily Study, Audio & Prayer”
Has a subtitle
“Daily Guidance, Study & Prayer”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 219 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 27 characters.
3,165 characters.
Enough substance
1,042 characters.
27 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
1 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.91 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.88 average.
13,808,711 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
149,244 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
216 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements.”
63 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
173 MB.
Reasonable download size
220 MB.