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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
MyTime – Jehovah's Witnesses
Territory Helper28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Jehovah's Witnesses”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Productivity”
Has a subtitle
“Territory Helper Companion App”
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “territory”, “helper”.
First paragraph is 294 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 168 characters.
1,618 characters.
Enough substance
1,847 characters.
11 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
27 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.43 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.81 average.
620 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,414 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 8 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 3 days ago.
178 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
65 characters of release notes.
24 languages.
Localised listing
0 languages.
11 MB.
Reasonable download size
102 MB.