Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
MyTime – Jehovah's Witnesses
Pioneer App - Ministry PlannerPioneer App - Ministry Planner
Ultimate JW Field Service Tool
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Jehovah's Witnesses”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Ministry Planner”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “app”.
“Productivity”
Has a subtitle
“Ultimate JW Field Service Tool”
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 294 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 49 characters.
1,618 characters.
Enough substance
955 characters.
11 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.43 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.90 average.
620 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
137 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 8 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 11 days ago.
178 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- bug fixes”
24 languages.
Localised listing
11 languages.
11 MB.
Reasonable download size
45 MB.