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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
SwingU Golf GPS by Golf Genius
Hole19: Golf GPS Range Finder30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Golf GPS Range Finder”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Handicap Scorecard & Watch App”
Has a subtitle
“Scorecard, Shot Tracker, Stats”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 221 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 264 characters.
3,990 characters.
Enough substance
3,805 characters.
27 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
37 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
1 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.73 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.74 average.
135,642 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
22,154 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 17 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
Release notes say something
275 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
14 languages.
159 MB.
Reasonable download size
228 MB.