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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
SwingU Golf GPS by Golf Genius
18Birdies: Golf GPS Tracker30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Golf GPS Tracker”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Range Finder, Handicap, Score”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 221 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 54 characters.
3,990 characters.
Enough substance
3,955 characters.
27 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
23 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
1 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.73 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.92 average.
135,642 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
304,959 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 17 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 10 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug Fixes and Improvements”
1 language.
Localised listing
3 languages.
159 MB.
Reasonable download size
305 MB.