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Dianping: Discover Good Places
Hanhai Information Technology (Shanghai) Co.Ltd
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Simplify Your Life”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Discover Good Places”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Lifestyle”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 77 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 190 characters.
533 characters.
Enough substance
1,895 characters.
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
2.86 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.66 average.
4,258 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
7,039 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 11 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 9 days ago.
118 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
282 characters of release notes.
3 languages.
Localised listing
5 languages.
491 MB.
Reasonable download size
245 MB.