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Alipay - Simplify Your Life
美团-美好生活小帮手27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Simplify Your Life”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “美好生活小帮手”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Lifestyle”
Has a subtitle
“美食外卖打车酒店火车票，美团全都有”
9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 77 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 6 characters.
533 characters.
Enough substance
957 characters.
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
2.86 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.05 average.
4,258 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,786 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 11 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 11 days ago.
118 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
296 characters of release notes.
3 languages.
Localised listing
3 languages.
491 MB.
Reasonable download size
231 MB.