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Groupon - Local Deals Near Me
Activities, Discounts, Coupons
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Local Deals Near Me”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Deals & Coupons”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Activities, Discounts, Coupons”
Has a subtitle
“Local Discounts, Deals, Coupon”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “deals”, “coupon”.
First paragraph is 159 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 223 characters.
1,789 characters.
Enough substance
888 characters.
11 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.80 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.63 average.
602,996 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
7,267 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 14 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
237 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Small bug fixes and quality of life improvements”
7 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
237 MB.
Reasonable download size
24 MB.