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The Telegraph: UK & World News
TELEGRAPH MEDIA GROUP HOLDINGS LIMITED
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “UK & World News”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Listen to audio articles”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“From HBR, Economist, Bloomberg”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 438 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 158 characters.
3,923 characters.
Enough substance
3,470 characters.
4 bullet lines, 23 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
31 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.61 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.54 average.
1,532 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
372 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 30 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 38 days ago.
570 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Fixed a bug with listen history.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
70 MB.
Reasonable download size
98 MB.