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FamilyWall: Family Organizer
The game changer for families
21/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Family Organizer”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shared Calendar & To-Do Lists”
Has a subtitle
“The game changer for families”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “families”.
First paragraph is 239 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 300 characters.
2,949 characters.
Enough substance
3,807 characters.
17 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
24 bullet lines, 23 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.81 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.84 average.
400,065 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
23,847 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 32 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 5 days ago.
223 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
154 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
11 languages.
81 MB.
Reasonable download size
201 MB.