Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
TrainingPeaks: Plan Train Lift
MyWhoosh: Indoor Cycling App30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Plan Train Lift”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Indoor Cycling App”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “app”.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 94 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 68 characters.
2,265 characters.
Enough substance
1,991 characters.
9 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
4 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.70 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.67 average.
12,737 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
400 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
196 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements”
8 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
276 MB.
Reasonable download size
1220 MB.