Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
美团-美好生活小帮手
汽车之家-5亿人都在用的汽车AppOnly 美团
Both fight for
No overlap. These two are not chasing the same searches.
Only 汽车之家
10/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “美好生活小帮手”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “5亿人都在用的汽车App”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“美食外卖打车酒店火车票，美团全都有”
Has a subtitle
“看车买车用车，都回汽车之家”
17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 6 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 21 characters.
957 characters.
Enough substance
857 characters.
5 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
2 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
3.05 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.50 average.
1,786 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,445 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 11 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
296 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “优化产品性能，修复若干已知问题。”
3 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
231 MB.
Reasonable download size
342 MB.