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ProPay Payments
ChargeStripe: Stripe PaymentsChargeStripe: Stripe Payments
POS & Credit Card Payments
15/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Stripe Payments”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Accept Credit Cards”
Has a subtitle
“POS & Credit Card Payments”
19/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “payments”.
First paragraph is 265 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 45 characters.
1,999 characters.
Enough substance
1,544 characters.
17 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
13 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
2.82 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.61 average.
61 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,084 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 610 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 19 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and enhancements.”
Release notes say something
85 characters of release notes.
3 languages.
Localised listing
10 languages.
43 MB.
Reasonable download size
56 MB.