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Pay for Stripe15/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Accept Credit Cards”
Has a subtitle
“Accept Credit Card Payments”
19/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 265 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 57 characters.
1,999 characters.
Enough substance
2,667 characters.
17 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 24 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
2.82 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.75 average.
61 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,502 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 610 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 239 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and enhancements.”
Release notes say something
85 characters of release notes.
3 languages.
Localised listing
3 languages.
43 MB.
Reasonable download size
98 MB.