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Chimani: National Parks
National Park Trail Guide23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “National Parks”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Trip Planner & Offline Maps”
Has a subtitle
“National parks guide and maps”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “national”, “parks”, “guide”.
First paragraph is 44 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 102 characters.
3,633 characters.
Enough substance
1,444 characters.
60 bullet lines, 34 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.47 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.54 average.
1,157 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,460 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 11 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 14 days ago.
256 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and maintenance.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
214 MB.
Reasonable download size
108 MB.