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Find Friends Around the World
2/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Make New Friends”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “new”.
“Social Networking”
Has a subtitle
“Find Friends Around the World”
17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “friends”.
First paragraph is 8 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 69 characters.
1,968 characters.
Enough substance
2,479 characters.
13 bullet lines, 23 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
2.67 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.74 average.
9,005 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
75,887 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 8 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
155 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Smashed a few bugs and made the app smoother!”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
826 MB.
Reasonable download size
138 MB.