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Redpoint: Bouldering, Climbing
#1 Climbing Tracker for Watch
16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Bouldering, Climbing”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Sports”
Has a subtitle
“#1 Climbing Tracker for Watch”
6/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “climbing”.
First paragraph is 60 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 146 characters.
935 characters.
Enough substance
2,045 characters.
8 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.57 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.45 average.
4,590 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
565 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 6 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 120 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and maintenance.”
Release notes say something
449 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
8 languages.
79 MB.
Reasonable download size
94 MB.