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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Citymapper: All Live Transit
Bonjour RATPCitymapper: All Live Transit
Live Bus, Subway, Train Times
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “All Live Transit”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Live Bus, Subway, Train Times”
Has a subtitle
“Subway, RER, Trains, Navigo”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “live”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 88 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 63 characters.
3,873 characters.
Enough substance
2,245 characters.
4 bullet lines, 20 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
17 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.86 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.79 average.
108,960 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,017 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 8 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 15 days ago.
113 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
271 characters of release notes.
14 languages.
Localised listing
7 languages.
292 MB.
Reasonable download size
196 MB.