Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
RedeApp: Work + Communities
Paychex Oasis Employee Connect27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Work + Communities”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Business”
Has a subtitle
“Business”
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 47 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 186 characters.
2,185 characters.
Enough substance
972 characters.
0 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
13 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
3.34 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.11 average.
95 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
228 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 12 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 20 days ago.
410 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
132 characters of release notes.
20 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
52 MB.
Reasonable download size
29 MB.