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Evertel – For 1st Responders13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “For 1st Responders”.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“K9 Record Keeping”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 573 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 381 characters.
2,494 characters.
Enough substance
3,461 characters.
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.95 average.
5 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
41 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 365 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 18 days ago.
Generic notes: “Added support for Single Sign-On”
Release notes say something
1087 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
21 MB.
Reasonable download size
115 MB.