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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
PackTrack App
Intrepid Response13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“K9 Record Keeping”
Has a subtitle
“Team Collaboration Platform”
17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 573 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 185 characters.
2,494 characters.
Enough substance
1,363 characters.
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
18 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.33 average.
5 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
24 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 365 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 37 days ago.
Generic notes: “Added support for Single Sign-On”
Release notes say something
357 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
21 MB.
Reasonable download size
163 MB.