Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Cityline Ticketing
摩天轮-演唱会、赛事、剧Both fight for
No overlap. These two are not chasing the same searches.
Only 摩天轮
18/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “演唱会、赛事、剧”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“销量第一的二级演出票App”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 90 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 87 characters.
680 characters.
Enough substance
833 characters.
8 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
1.80 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.95 average.
15 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
57 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 10 days ago.
Generic notes: “Thanks for using Cityline App. This release includes bug fixes and per…”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “1.用户逾期补贴”
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
46 MB.
Reasonable download size
113 MB.