Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Cityline Ticketing
大麦 - 电影、演出、体育购票平台大麦 - 电影、演出、体育购票平台
Beijing Damai Cultural Media Development Co., Ltd.
18/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “电影、演出、体育购票平台”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 90 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 72 characters.
680 characters.
Enough substance
456 characters.
8 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
1.80 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.31 average.
15 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
435 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
Generic notes: “Thanks for using Cityline App. This release includes bug fixes and per…”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “优化视频播放体验，看现场视频更流畅”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
46 MB.
Reasonable download size
223 MB.