Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
ThredUp: Online Thrift Store
Shop & Sell Secondhand Clothes
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Online Thrift Store”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Shop & Sell Fashion”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shop & Sell Secondhand Clothes”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 98 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 15 characters.
3,055 characters.
Enough substance
1,981 characters.
9 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.74 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.80 average.
305,172 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,084,387 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
71 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
183 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
196 MB.
Reasonable download size
218 MB.