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AfterShip Package Tracker
Packages - Track Your ParcelsAfterShip Package Tracker
All Couriers Order Tracking
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Track Your Parcels”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“All Couriers Order Tracking”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 85 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 100 characters.
3,834 characters.
Enough substance
3,947 characters.
60 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.73 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.74 average.
163,477 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
13,557 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 361 days ago.
Generic notes: “## Fix - Improved user experience of some features”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “* Fix for UI display issue on iPhone Air”
12 languages.
Localised listing
16 languages.
97 MB.
Reasonable download size
45 MB.