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AfterShip Package Tracker
Route: Package TrackerAfterShip Package Tracker
All Couriers Order Tracking
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Package Tracker”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“All Couriers Order Tracking”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 85 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 360 characters.
3,834 characters.
Enough substance
2,449 characters.
60 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 32 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.73 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.83 average.
163,477 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
518,907 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 5 days ago.
Generic notes: “## Fix - Improved user experience of some features”
Release notes say something
225 characters of release notes.
12 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
97 MB.
Reasonable download size
199 MB.