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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Stick Tennis
Table Tennis Touch12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
18/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“#1 Tennis Game”
Has a subtitle
“Offline ping pong”
14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “tennis”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 57 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 193 characters.
1,170 characters.
Enough substance
1,186 characters.
9 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.70 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.25 average.
7,823 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4,769 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 78 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 515 days ago.
Generic notes: “We've fine-tuned the game with bug fixes and performance improvements …”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements. Thanks for playing!”
3 languages.
Localised listing
12 languages.
31 MB.
Reasonable download size
387 MB.