Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
淘宝闪购-点外卖更优惠
美团外卖-外卖订餐,送啥都快11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “点外卖更优惠”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “外卖订餐,送啥都快”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“饿了么，外卖美食订餐买菜超市跑腿爆火好店”
Has a subtitle
“Food & Drink”
20/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 10 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 17 characters.
552 characters.
Enough substance
444 characters.
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.81 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.77 average.
22,369 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
22,318 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 25 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 12 days ago.
Generic notes: “为了让您更好的体验饿了么与淘宝闪购，我们进行了一些产品更新，多项细节优化，希望为您提供更好的使用体验~”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “优化一些细节体验，期待你的更新～”
2 languages.
Localised listing
4 languages.
214 MB.
Reasonable download size
194 MB.