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OfferUp Buy & Sell Marketplace
Buying & Selling Items Locally
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Buy & Sell Clothes”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone, which is fine at this brand size.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Thrift Clothing Marketplace”
Has a subtitle
“Buying & Selling Items Locally”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 182 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 286 characters.
3,063 characters.
Enough substance
3,304 characters.
1 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.82 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.75 average.
1,026,394 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4,445,221 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 11 days ago.
106 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
138 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
343 MB.
Reasonable download size
171 MB.