Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
ThredUp: Online Thrift Store
Shop & Sell Secondhand Clothes
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Buy & Sell Clothes”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Online Thrift Store”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Thrift Clothing Marketplace”
Has a subtitle
“Shop & Sell Secondhand Clothes”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 182 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 98 characters.
3,063 characters.
Enough substance
3,055 characters.
1 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.82 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.74 average.
1,026,394 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
305,172 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
106 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
71 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
343 MB.
Reasonable download size
196 MB.