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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
AlarmMon ( alarm clock )
Bedside Clock - Time widgets24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Time widgets”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 90 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 135 characters.
2,412 characters.
Enough substance
738 characters.
9 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.66 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.55 average.
1,129 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3,680 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 162 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 84 days ago.
Generic notes: “fixed bugs.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements.”
13 languages.
Localised listing
33 languages.
83 MB.
Reasonable download size
68 MB.