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The Wonder Weeks - Baby leaps
Development milestone tracker
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Baby leaps”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Your Baby Tracker”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Development milestone tracker”
Has a subtitle
“Baby Development & Tracker App”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “baby”, “tracker”.
First paragraph is 138 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 219 characters.
1,961 characters.
Enough substance
3,513 characters.
10 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
23 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.85 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.72 average.
122,098 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
7,783 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 50 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 316 days ago.
Generic notes: “We’ve made a few minor improvements and fixed some bugs for a better a…”
Release notes say something
151 characters of release notes.
16 languages.
Localised listing
19 languages.
266 MB.
Reasonable download size
202 MB.