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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Hello WaterColor
Mona - How to draw16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
18/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “How to draw”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Education”
Has a subtitle
“Learn how to draw step by step”
9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “draw”.
First paragraph is 122 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 37 characters.
847 characters.
Enough substance
1,445 characters.
5 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
3.63 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.23 average.
86 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
40 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3325 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 288 days ago.
Generic notes: “- iOS 10 support - Apple Pencil support”
Release notes say something
259 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
75 MB.
Reasonable download size
12 MB.