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Bleems - Flowers & Gifts
Fresh Flowers & Gift Delivery
24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Flowers & Gifts”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Fresh Flowers & Gift Delivery”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “flowers”, “gift”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 51 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 102 characters.
1,400 characters.
Enough substance
1,106 characters.
0 bullet lines, 18 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.22 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.09 average.
12,359 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
68 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 89 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 14 days ago.
127 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “performance improvements”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
136 MB.
Reasonable download size
81 MB.