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Bleems - Flowers & Gifts
Fresh Flowers & Gift Delivery
24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Flowers & Gifts”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Fresh Flowers & Gift Delivery”
Has a subtitle
“Future of gifting”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “flowers”, “gift”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 51 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 80 characters.
1,400 characters.
Enough substance
1,840 characters.
0 bullet lines, 18 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.22 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.13 average.
12,359 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
40 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 89 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 64 days ago.
127 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixed minor bugs and improved performance”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
136 MB.
Reasonable download size
90 MB.