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Raley's
Holiday Markets Rewards7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shopping”
Has a subtitle
“Shopping”
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 260 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 318 characters.
1,862 characters.
Enough substance
642 characters.
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.59 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.81 average.
18,210 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
32 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 11 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 17 days ago.
Generic notes: “Feature enhancements and bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
287 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
63 MB.
Reasonable download size
79 MB.