Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Smash Hit
Dune!9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
5/30 characters. A brand this well known can afford a short title.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone, which is fine at this brand size.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Smash through obstacles”
Has a subtitle
“Smoothest game ever!”
23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “smash”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 292 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 125 characters.
979 characters.
Enough substance
125 characters.
3 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.56 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.54 average.
109,213 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
544,979 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 178 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and minor improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
11 languages.
87 MB.
Reasonable download size
294 MB.