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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
FarOut: Hike, Bike, Paddle
The A.T. GuideFarOut: Hike, Bike, Paddle
Offline GPS Trail Maps
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Hike, Bike, Paddle”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Offline GPS Trail Maps”
Has a subtitle
“Official Awol Guide PDF App”
22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “guide”.
First paragraph is 279 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 774 characters.
2,304 characters.
Enough substance
4,000 characters.
5 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.79 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.55 average.
26,657 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
20 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 17 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 326 days ago.
1969 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes”
4 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
173 MB.
Reasonable download size
36 MB.