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Tap Tap Fish - AbyssRium11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “AbyssRium”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Strategy”
Has a subtitle
“My healing aquarium”
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
19/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 92 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 60 characters.
1,617 characters.
Enough substance
3,944 characters.
12 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.17 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.48 average.
3,193 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
24,169 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2758 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
Generic notes: “Updates to Facebook integration”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixed an issue where some collections were not displayed.”
1 language.
Localised listing
5 languages.
268 MB.
Reasonable download size
1640 MB.