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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Tunnel Town
Doll Divine11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Strategy”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 92 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 63 characters.
1,617 characters.
Enough substance
1,764 characters.
12 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.17 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.48 average.
3,193 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
913 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2758 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 750 days ago.
Generic notes: “Updates to Facebook integration”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and Improvements”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
268 MB.
Reasonable download size
59 MB.