Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Boyner – Online Shopping
Shopping & Fashion – Cosmetics
24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
19/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Online Shopping”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Online Shopping”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shopping & Fashion – Cosmetics”
Has a subtitle
“Shopping, Fashion”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “shopping”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “shopping”.
First paragraph is 129 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 232 characters.
3,931 characters.
Enough substance
3,001 characters.
0 bullet lines, 18 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
14 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.79 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.73 average.
2,004 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4,276 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 20 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 7 days ago.
511 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
238 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
97 MB.
Reasonable download size
123 MB.