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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
FoodCoach: Nutrition Tracker
Cycling Fantasy: Race ManagerCycling Fantasy: Race Manager
Pro Tour Peloton Strategy
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Nutrition Tracker”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Race Manager”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Macro & Meal Plan for Athletes”
Has a subtitle
“Pro Tour Peloton Strategy”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 55 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 51 characters.
3,587 characters.
Enough substance
2,426 characters.
20 bullet lines, 25 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 26 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
2.57 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.74 average.
14 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
174 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 1 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 13 days ago.
Generic notes: “Improvements and bug fixes”
Release notes say something
406 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
8 languages.
80 MB.
Reasonable download size
161 MB.