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Office Word:Edit Word Document
Word Editor: Edit Documents®30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Edit Word Document”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Edit Documents®”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Write & Edit Word, Office Docs”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “edit”, “word”.
First paragraph is 370 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 40 characters.
3,910 characters.
Enough substance
2,062 characters.
6 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
15 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.62 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.34 average.
9,584 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
756 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 778 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 169 days ago.
86 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
96 characters of release notes.
19 languages.
Localised listing
24 languages.
227 MB.
Reasonable download size
34 MB.