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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Idle Nightclub Tycoon: Manager
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VIP party, DJ & club simulator
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Manager”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“VIP party, DJ & club simulator”
Has a subtitle
“Manage jails, help prisioners”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 260 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 78 characters.
3,175 characters.
Enough substance
3,137 characters.
9 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.85 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.57 average.
8,236 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
87,626 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
211 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor bug fixes, and performance improvements”
11 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
489 MB.
Reasonable download size
1815 MB.