Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Idle Nightclub Tycoon: Manager
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VIP party, DJ & club simulator
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Manager”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Idle Game”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“VIP party, DJ & club simulator”
Has a subtitle
“Gym Workout Simulator”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
21/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 260 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 65 characters.
3,175 characters.
Enough substance
3,103 characters.
9 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.85 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.90 average.
8,236 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
9,594 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 176 days ago.
211 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Optimized game experience”
11 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
489 MB.
Reasonable download size
419 MB.