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GAIL's Bakery
DUSK - Drinks, Deals & RewardsDUSK - Drinks, Deals & Rewards
Drinks on the house everyday
13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Drinks, Deals & Rewards”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Food & Drink”
Has a subtitle
“Drinks on the house everyday”
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “drinks”.
First paragraph is 80 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 32 characters.
539 characters.
Enough substance
1,016 characters.
3 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.27 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.88 average.
51 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
600 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 62 days ago.
Generic notes: “App improvments and fixes”
Release notes say something
122 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
50 MB.
Reasonable download size
69 MB.